Thread:DinoAdrian5/@comment-5138366-20180223145949

Hello! I couldn't help noticing you posted various comments on Yume Nijino's page, and I regret to inform you that your sentences are inappropriate because they're simply wrong!!!

Let's take the first one for example...

DinoAdrian5 wrote: In Lovely Memory Yume Nijino This sentence is clearly missing a preposition that would express the case (as in grammar category) of the following noun. In other words, it should be "In lovely memory of XY".

Now to move on:

DinoAdrian5 wrote: Yume Nijino is Died/Die This sentence has little to no sense, for neither of the verb combinations you made is correct. However, there are various possibilities how to fix it.
 * XY died. (past simple - for sitution that happened in the past)
 * XY dies. (present simple - for sitution that happens in the present)
 * XY is dying. (present simple continious - for situation currently in process)
 * XY has died. (present perfect - for situations that happened in the past, but are relevant to the present)

DinoAdrian5 wrote: Yume Nijino Drink Poison and Died/Dead

For this one you got the verb form wrong once again. It should be "XY drank poison and died" when you want to use past tenses, or "XY drinks poison and dies" would be acceptable as well, if you're looking for present tenses. Additionally, poison as a common noun in sigular, so I would recommend you to to determinate it somehow. And one more thing, if you cannot use the adjective "dead" the way you implied in the second version.

Oh, wait! There is a way you could use the base form "drink", and that would be if you use imperative: "XY, drink poison and die!" I nearly forgot about that.

DinoAdrian5 wrote:Yume Nijino is Dead/Death You actually got the first version of the sentence correctly, congratulations! However, the second option is correct only in case you want to say that a person (XY) itself is the action of dying... which I doubt somehow...

To sum up, I would reccomend you to revise the grammar a bit and if possibly to add interpunction as well... because otherwise your comments could annoy/anger some users here.

Have a nice day! 