User blog comment:Chrismh/Coord Competition (for fun!) Round 1: High Spirits! Yummy Sweets Sponsor Girl!/@comment-31049330-20170423134500/@comment-3237624-20170423150932

This coord is much better, it fits overall with the theme, and all of the pieces go well together too. The only bad thing is that you didn't give it a befitting name for the theme XD but the names aren't really the point.