User blog comment:Chrismh/Coord Competition Round 23: Bon Bon Voyage!/@comment-34308169-20180331155322/@comment-3237624-20180401022101

Okay, before I just these I should worn you that duplicates aren't appreciated- and I'm pretty sure we have all of these pieces on the wiki already...

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8/10. This coord looks like you copied one already made- in fact I had to check; which was fairly difficult due to uploading new images. Besides generic details, I don't have anything to say about it. It doesn't wow or amaze me though.

~2~

6/10. In terms of the pieces going together, I guess I can see where you were going with this one; but the shoes look too dressy to go with the casualness of the top and bottoms. I also see a lack of color balance in this coord- which is disappointing when you look at the previous coord. I could see the top and bottoms pieces working together, but I feel like the shoes ruin it.