User blog comment:Chrismh/Coord Competition Round 25: School Performance/@comment-5812133-20180414172425/@comment-3237624-20180414234733

I love the story effort you put into this XD it was what I was hoping people would do so I am glad that a few did.

6/10. I'm surprised to say because you usually do very good, but this one is all over the place and I find it hard to picture coming together properly. I'm seeing a nice color balance, and I love the creativity you put into the coord, but it looks like it can't make up its mind in what statement it's trying to make, you know?