User blog comment:Chrismh/Coord Competition Round 10: Fuwa Fuwa Parfait/@comment-32103982-20170702172245/@comment-3237624-20170703133431

Well, for your first try you did really good. The colors match on every piece nearly perfectly (I say that because I don't see green on the skirt), and I can see the star gimmick as well (expect for the shoes), which kinda has the green theme that the skirt lacks so it balances out perfectly. The bright colors on the pieces remind me of candies, but in a minor detail- the flowers on the shoes detract from the theme. Very minor though, so it's not anything worth penalizing.

Overall I'd give it a 9.5 out of 10