User blog comment:Chrismh/Coord Competition Round 18: Floral Fashions/@comment-29674848-20170830055331/@comment-24288618-20170830091601

Right.

Despite the purple dominance color, the coord just doesn't come together. The top is has a fitting outline and a more show girl style, while the skirt's white just blasts off any color coordination that was happening. The large outline of the skirt also contrasts too much with the top.

Then the shoes. Choosing gothic shoes is probably one of the worse options that you could go for. The socks stuff up everything and make it all, stuffy. The white colors in the coord is also out of place. The flower itself has no white at all.

As for the crown, out of place as well. There's just not one part of this coord where the accessory has a common theme with it.

Do know that my harsh feedback means no ill will. I do want to help you improve for your next round.

Appearance: 4/10

Creativity: 2/5