User blog comment:Chrismh/Coord Competition Round 12: Perfect Kiss~/@comment-5812133-20170711134959/@comment-3237624-20170711150558

Oh, well I'm glad then XD I tend to worry about giving critique, especially since I'm no professional. But I like to think I do know at least a little bit by now.

I actually really like that you seemed to put Elza's best interest in mind. You got personal with her, I'm sure she approves of this (even if she won't tell you XD). Although to be honest, the brandless look didn't need to be based on an Idol, but I didn't exactly say you couldn't do this either, so you're fine.

This coord is lovely! At first I worried the skirt stuck out against the top and shoes, but when you look at all four pieces it's actually really pretty. The gold accents are there, it's sparkly and fashionable, each piece has it's own regal/fancy/royal-like vibe to it, you got the coloring for sure. It helps that the shoes are a pink-red color, while the accessory features both colors.

I'm giving this a 10 out of 10. I really like it and how you catered to her apropriate needs. I don't think anybody else did that.

This next coord is also really pretty! You really stepped up your game for this round :3 I don't really have much to say about this one, except that the only thing bothering me are the tiny accents pulling the coord together XD like, the skirt has orange and pink flowers on it and some black detail. I can see these colors in small amounts on the shoes, but nowhere else so I feel a tiny amount of disconnect. You get what I mean?

9 out of 10. The shape of the coord, the colors, they're right XD it's just a tiny defect keeping it from being perfect.