Thread:Sakurairo/@comment-30498997-20161020091930/@comment-28308079-20170217044537

You spelled it right ^^ Yep, I can't agree more!

I think your critique is nice and fun to read! I'm curious if you'll do the same for other stages too?

EDIT:

I've finished the translation. Sorry for the long wait!

Lovely Rainbow Coord 

レインボーのフリルとハート柄がとってもキュート 

もっと輝いてアイドルの一番星になれちゃう ,  ゆめいっぱいのコーデ !

The rainbow frills and heart patterns are very cute

With the will to shine more and become the first star idol, the coord is full of dreams!

<span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">Aqua Starry Rock Coord 

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">キラめく星とブルーのレオパード柄がポイントのロックなコーデ <span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">自分だけのロックスタイルで <span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">No.1を目指す女の子にピッタリ

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt; line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">The sparkling stars and blue leopard pattern are the coord’s points!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt; line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">The coord suits for girls who aim to be number one with her own rock style

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">Green Butterfly Tail Coord 

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">深い緑と金色に輝く蝶の刺繍が印象的な物語性の強いドレス <span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">青いバラをあしらって <span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">, ゴシックヴィクトリアらしい高貴なコーデになっているよ!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt; line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">A strong and impressive dress with butterfly embroidery, deep green and shining gold color!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt; line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">With the arrangement of blue roses, the coord looks noble which really suits Gothic Victoria!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">Exotic Sunset Coord 

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">エキゾチックな魅力がたっぷりで <span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">, まるで異国のお姫様のような豪華なコーデ

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">まさにロマンスキスらしいドレスになっているよ <span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt; line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">With plenty of exotic charms, the coord looks like a wonderful outfit of a princess from foreign countries

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt; line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">The coord is just like Romance Kiss!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">Colorful Cat Coord 

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">ふんわりパステルカラーの夢カワコーデ <span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">ネコのモチーフがたくさん隠れていてとっても個性的 <span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">アクセや袖についているかわいい鈴もポイント <span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">ネコが大好きな女の子にぴったりなドレスだよ <span style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">A fluffy pastel color coord with dreams!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">There are a lot of cat motifs which conceals one’s personality

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">The points also lie in cute bells as accessories and the sleeves

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Meiryo","sans-serif"">It's a perfect dress for girls who love cats