User blog comment:Chrismh/Coord Competition Round 18: Floral Fashions/@comment-31049330-20170827175924/@comment-24288618-20170828012459

The problem is the white stockings on those shoes. Because your skirt is oriental, the stockings are stuffy for the hot-weather skirt despite the color match. While the tops outline can be let off as a pass, all the patterns and decorations on it are disturbing and mismatching compared to the rest of the coord. The accessory that was chosen also has too obvious of a theme. It screams Halloween, and yet this round is nothing about Halloween. Also despite the color variations, chrysanthemum is best known for its yellow shade.

Appearance: 5/10

Creativity: 3/5