User blog comment:Yumesuzuki/Aikatsu Stories- first live/@comment-29740360-20170412230314/@comment-29740360-20170414231319

Thanks... I can give you pointers if you want! (To start: Mines it not a word... Unless you are refferring to it as in something like coal mines. So, you would say this is mine, not this is mines.I can keep ginving you advice! Hope this helped!)