User:Jo SHININGSTAR/Coord Competition Entries

Below are the list of entries for the rounds of Chrismh's Coord Competitions that I have joined.

Scenario
On days when the heat is beating down nothing feels better than drinking some iced tea with lemon, or a nice glass of water while relaxing in the shade. And so, your task for this setting is to create a cooling outfit perfect for lounging with a cold drink!

Description
Inspired by by favorite mixed drink, Mojito!

Comment
I've only had a small sip from one before, but I remember the scent clearly. It was pretty good XD

This is great for someone who hasn't done one of these in a while. All of the pieces match each other in style and color, I really get that drink vibe looking at the pieces; a fizzy type of drink (it'd have also fit mountain dew or any other citrus type drink too). You also fit the rules provided.

I have to say this coord probably won the round. I want to give it a perfect 10/10.

Scenario
Today the original Aikatsu Idols are checking out the current Idols after being invited to attend an Idol Festival currently going on. With them all having a break from their busy Idol lives, they agree; however, they request that they are all given AiStar coords to fit in more. Everyone eagerly agrees and it's up to you to give each of the girls a special, unique coord befitting of the AiStars.

Description
For Nono, I wanted to match her pink theme color, and because I also saw Nono as the "Doll" side of the brand. The top's color also reminds me of Silky Love Devil Coord. This strong corset and stockings game is totally Dolly Devil. as for the name, I name it, Iolite Dolly Coord.

For Risa, she's my "Devil" side of the brand, therefore the darker color and to also match her purple theme color. This is kind of like the Dolly Leopard Coord's color except theres no pink. The sexy halter top and those fishnets simply scream Dolly Devil. And for the name, Alexandrite Devil Coord.

I chose ribbons as their accessories, first of all to have them twin, second of all to display a dolly devil motif, and third of all, trying to stay away from the show girl-dolly devil-romance kiss stuff.

Comment
In terms of their coords, I like that you tried to go with a challenge, and that you gave them similarities in various details. They're pretty good too, I generally like them but I find the colors could use a fine-tuning in some peices (oddly the skirt and accessories for both I think). But the colors do work together, so it's sort of minor.

Scenario
With the upcoming Fantasy movie, "Aqua Mermaid" coming out Idols are flocking at once to play the titular Mermaid; a young and innocent mermaid that longs to play on the surface waters with the humans and reunite with her sisters who has since left their ocean world.

Description
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Comment
Oh, this is really fancy~

Definitely loving the various details, they all scream water royalty beneath the ocean. The accessory is wonderful as well, and feels bubbly to me x3 I'd definitely give this one a 10.

Scenario
As part of the collab series, the first two are proud to present an ultra-comfty, super fluffy new snack food everyone will want to snack on: Sweet Berry Parfait-flavored Cotton Candy! To prepare for this release, both brands need to work together to chose a sponsor girl for their commercial.

Description
Sweet Dreams Top: We're talking about cotton candy here. No one can live without something being fluffy. It incorporates pink, a key color when thinking about cotton candy. The entire top is screaming of colorful candy and sweets.

Pompom Cherry Skirt: After pink cotton candy, it's pretty much blue! So here we are. Also, no one can forget about the fluffiness when thinking cotton candy.

Rose Amour Ribbon Wedge Sole: To finish off the coord, a pair of summer shoes to match the current season, topped with a cute candy in the middle of the bow on the shoe. The two chains of beads also scream candy.

Rainbow Dream Headband: A final boost of fluffiness from the bow, and a final boost of cotton candy pink and blue from it, along with "rainbow candy beads" and "rainbow candy earrings".

Comment
Oh this is lovely Jo, and I like that you took the time to explain your reasoning behind the pieces. Looking at them all, I instantly think of fluffy pastel marshmallow~

and luckily, I'm obsessed with marshmallows XD

This is a perfect representation of the brand combination :3 The accents are perfect for each piece, it's visually pleasing to the eye, I really can't think of anything negative to say about it because it's so cute.

Scenario
Following the success of the fuwafuwa parfait cotton candy line, the next collaborators are taking stage: Gothic Victoria and Shiny Smile, coming out with a brand new frozen treat just in time for summer: Poppin' Evening Ice Pop! Together, Ako, Lilie, and Yuzu have come up with some yummy new blends and it's up the Idols trying out to match their flavors!

Description
I'm going for Yuzu because I like things challenging.

And this coord competition is basically insane.

While digging up for coords, i even managed to pull up a Lilie coord, so I'm including it here to get some opinions, even though I'm submitting Yuzu's for the competition.

A coord thats the lemon side of the citrus family. Due to unforseen circumstances with the almost impossible to match Shiny Smile's bright colors to Gothic Victoria's, this pair of shoes were chosen. Now, why this pair of shoes? Because the ice pop features a hidden grape jelly inside of it...(PS the accessory)

Comment
I'm glad to see you chose something else besides Lilie XD after seeing the first two I started to worry about it.

Anyway, I LOVE the thought you put into this coord! The top and skirt were literally made for each other. Meanwhile, I admit that the shoes were probably a little difficult, and the colors are kinda off from the rest of the coord. However, I think the gold accent and white socks save it from being completely out of place! They really accent every other piece in the coord, and I do admit that the "out of place" colors actually accent the gimmick I implied, and I like how you made it your own. You couldn't have chosen a better accessory either XD I love it.

9.5 out of 10

Okay, so for Lilie I think you pretty much nailed the coloring gimmick pretty well. I especially love the top and bottoms paired together, they look MADE for each other- again XD I also like how their accents go well with the detail on the shoes, and they match the accessory fairly well. Mentally picturing it, I think I'd like to see gold or yellow on the accessory to compliment the overall coord more, but I like this :D

Description
It was super hard to try to stick to the autumn color due to the fact that the skirt's green is so bright and pops out so badly.

I managed to find something to pull out though. Phew. I'd say this coord is somewhere between autumn and winter, but should be fitting for both. (add a cardigan for winter :P)

The top was originally paired with a bright green skirt as well, so I thought I'd use that, since thats literally the last resort. Also with the problem of your request for earthy colors XD

The black sort of neutralises the summer colors to a more darker tone, and those white boots are just perfect with the top.

I decided something simple and clean for the accessories would be a good choice, so I went for the Soleil headband.

Comment
I like this x3 Right away I could have said I see no color matching whatsoever. But when you look at it, the accents of each piece compliment the main piece, the skirt, which I like because not too many people try to aim for that. The top and shoes definitely scream fall to me, both in style and colors, which I also like.

10 out of 10. I really don't see anything wrong with this coord. I stared at it for a good while, and even visualizing it, I just can't find anything wrong XD it's unique, but I really like it.

Scenario
The "Sweet Blossom Flower Shop" has become in bad shape and is in desparate need of repairs. However, the young, budding florist, Sakura Midori, is having trouble getting business due to the shops odd location. 'To repay her for her kindness and efforts towards them, several Idols have decided to band together and hold a performance at her shop to catch the eye of fans and flower lovers alike while wearing special, one-of-a-kind, unique flower fashions!

Description
I went with one coord because I poured my heart into this thing, and I am workin' it girl! I have based mine off the bird-of-paradise, with its flowers being orange represented in the top, and the leaves of the beautiful plant in the skirt. The purple represents the small buds in between the orange. A coord like this is where you can earn a great amount of creativity points. I incoorperated a premium rare top and a winged accessory, and these are challenging pieces. Now, its not that I'm saying I encourage you to use these items because it can be difficult, and if it goes wrong it can go down.

Description
Ok I deem it as cute

But more on the sexy side

Is cute-sexy a thing?

So I didn't wanna go for the norm, so I became your not-so-average-run-on-the-mill girlfriend. Not-so-average girlfriend wanted to dress up looking hot for Valentine's date and so here it is.

Yea I know this coord is hard to visualise if it matches. Took me quite awhile.

I wanted to go for a dark-hot pink theme cus you know, girlfriend needs to look gorjass for her date

Bow on the top adds a touch of cute little devil (OMG YES THATS MY CONCEPT HAAHA)

Flowers on the skirt

Roses and red pumps -->that heavy valentine theme

Black stockings to up the hot 'n' sexy o' meter

And the very in your face accessory.

Comment
That's fine, I don't mind multi-coord entries that much now.

I like how you went for a sexy and romantic theme meanwhile. I really like the combination of the pieces too, and they each scream "romance me!", perfect for a date or trying to get the attention of someone else XD The colors are flawlessly matched, like if I really had to nitpick anything I'd say the fact that the dark blue top stands out against the dark purple skirt, but that's really grasping at straws in my opinion- because it's not that big of a difference, and their accents match with each other, and the other pieces.

I have to give this a 10 x3 I'm not an expert at attire judgement, but I really like it and nothing extremely obvious sticks out to me that would say it deserves lower.

Description
Not-so-average girlfriend decided that she and her boyfriend needs to go on another date to this awesome rock concert on the 13th. SO not-run-on-the-mill girlfriend decides to pull out this awesome outfit.

Once again girlfriend is feeling very narcissistic and is loving her dress.

We've got the totally rock-ish top, and I think the arm cuffs makes it extra cool-cute.

The skirt goes really well due to the fact that its black+red combo with the top, and both have that red checkered fabric. Dinggdinggdingg bonus BOW to amp up the cuteness

Finally we've got those sexy-cool velvet red stockings that make girlfriend looks super amazing, and those boots totally look cool. DINGIDNGIDNG RoSE

Girlfriend also wanted to throw in a really bad reference with the accessory because it has wings: fly me to the moon. Also cus in the lyrics, it mentioned: "moon, jupiter, mars". SO three diamonds = three stars = three planets (sorry I just had to)

Comment
For fun, I believe this would be a 8 out of 10. I love the chosen colors, and the pieces, and I can see the hints from the provided inspiration. I also love your descriptions x3

The reason for a lower score is because while the shoes piece goes great with the coord, the colors kind of stand out in comparison to the rest of it. Like the reddish tone used doesn't match, there's blue on it when nothing else has blue. I also noticed the top lacks gold detail, which every other piece has.

Scenario
To reward you for your effort and hard work this past season the school has decided to send you to an early-spring and summer cruise to a tropical area where the cooler weather has faded. Be sure you catch the boat on time!

Description
A daytime fun, possibly getting off the cruise and wandering around town casual coord. This will be my just for fun one. My main charm for this just-for-fun coord is definitely the combo between the summer top and the casual spring/summer pants. This is completely for morning walk/casual. That was where I got my concept.

Comment
While the colors of the Aurora Butterfly skirt would fit the first outfit better, it feels like one of those "anyone could have thought of that" moves. So I like that you went different. Although I don't see anything on it that screams tropical, and pairing those shoes with the pants just looks weird to me, I think it's because of how busy they are. If it was just the sandals it'd look better.

Description
My second one is gonna be a captain's lounge, cocktail party to kick off the cruise. The overall theme of the coord is sunset, because what better than to enjoy the sunset over the horizon on a cruise? POINT: the gorgeous mermaid pisces shoes because it screams OCEAN and SUMMER!

Comment
Meanwhile onto your real coord. I love it x3 It's very colorful and kind of all over the place, but the color scheme screams sunset or sunrise, and it's so shimmery from all the glitter, adding to the elegance. I love how nearly each piece has a lot of the same elements; like the gems, gold details, pink, orange, red. Everything is brought together in a colorful and gorgeous package.

10/10 - I really wish I could find something wrong, but nothing is really reaching out at me. I wanted to say it was too colorful, but it really works with this coord and I can't penalize that XD