Thread:Chrismh/@comment-30269588-20190131184144/@comment-3237624-20190313082240

Anyway, here's the other set you asked for. I will be completely honest in looking them over.

I also thought I should point out things bothering me in their profiles- in case you're ever wondering or want to improve them.

Maria - seems like a typical heroine of magical girl series. But she is cute, and I like those little differences, like how she has a "numb sense of cooking" and actually thinks about how her wanting to help comes off. However, I never liked the "one bad thing about Maria is that her friends are dumb", because technically that isn't about her, it just sounds like an insult to her friends.

Rin - I like her design, but I'm left feeling confused because you talk about Maria in her personality, information about Maria that I didn't see on her page that should probably be mentioned... I guess I like how she's different then most blue-type girls.

Gianna - Her design is really cute looking too, and I like her personality. We share birthdays, and I noticed we both also like to sing and cook, read, and can be kind of spoiled and selfish. I guess I know who I'd be like the most XD

Reni - She's okay, but I didn't have too much of an opinion on her. Like her personality details and stuff is fine, but her appearance is a bit under-whelming to me.

Sandra - I really like her design and I love the cute-looking sexy-type image. She's a girl I'd love to learn more about.

Claire - she's fine, I don't have too much of an opinion on her because she seems so basic childish/yellow/pop type to me. Her design is cute though.

Isabella - Again cute design. I like how she looks shy and soft but her personality and stuff screams Pop-type. You wouldn't expect that of her if you didn't read the page.

Christine - I like her princessy theme.

Mitzi - She's not bad or anything- but I didn't think much about her.

Verena - I think she's cute, but in all honesty I think her personality section needs a serious re-write. It's pretty repetitive and I just feel like it could be better. It doesn't say very much about her. The trivia has stuff that could easily be added into her personality.

Charlene - I really like her design too. She fits her information very well and I like her. But I did notice in the personality you said she could be extroverted, but in the trivia you said introverted.

J-Z - I was pretty surprised when I learned what she was like; but I like that. But you did mention people think she might be a pop idol twice in trivia.

Francine - I had no idea teal was her theme color until reading the page. I could definitely see her act the way she's described, and I like how different she is from the other girls.

Calista - No real opinion. She didn't really make an impression on me. The personal details are interesting, but to me her design felt a little generic (which is in no way meant to be offensive).

Serafina - As much as I love all the pink I was kind of excited to see a green girl at this point. I also like her plant theme and I think she'd be interesting to see more of.

Dana - I feel like her spring/summer outfit doesn't entirely go with her personal details, it feels too casual to me but I love her other outfit. I like her personality.

Beata - I feel like she's pretty one note in aspects of just being the nerdy shy girl. I mean there's nothing wrong with that but I feel like she's missing something. I like how she starts opening up a bit later on, but there should be some sort of... reasoning to why that is.

Pirjo - I like her design, and her personal details make her sound like a fun character.

Stefanie - I pretty much love everything about her. But I feel like she needs more to her than just "A cheery girl who loves sweets and is a confident cook, even though she's not very good at it". In the trivia, her inability to cook is also brought up again and I feel like it's not necessary.

Mina - She seems fine, I like her design but I don't have too much of an opinion.

Eleonora - I love her spring/summer outfit, and she looks like how she is described. Not much opinion besides that. Oh, also... "her weakness is weed". I seriously suggest you put "weeds" XD

Nevena - She's fine, but her appearance is like basic to me when you look at everybody else. It's not bad, but I feel like it could be better? She didn't leave any real impression on me either.

Lumi - I really like her, she might be one of my top favorites. She's very sweet and cute looking.

Parky - Her design is cute looking, but I think it's weird that she's considered a geek just because she likes to write, read, and use the computer. I mean if the computer/technology thing was her only attribute than yeah sure, I could see it.