Thread:Sakurairo/@comment-32094509-20170815174951/@comment-26154159-20170907194159

I'll use the word "dazzling" then. I think that I'll remove the word "cool" from the line. Because I view this word as the frost or cool, which fits Lily more. Don't you agree?

Here is the finished poem:

Be sharp like the silver sword Be calm like the gentle wind Be dazzling like the shooting star

For editing, move the character to right, but not farthest right. I wonder if you have a stylized, but royal letter font. Make it a bit smaller, like 1 cm smaller. If it doesn't look good, be it remain like this. Put a space after my username. Don't upload here yet, because I wanted to ask Jo regarding my render. ;-)

I wonder if you have any form of a social chat? Something like twitter or google hangouts.